Hello Sophie J I was happy to see you in the Monday Presentation Class!
I can feel your endless efforts to make this amazing presentation!
For the better performance, I would give you some comments.
1. Pronunciation
·[p]roperly : overall, [p] sound was weak.
·u[s]e : In the case of Noun, [s] sound doesn’t have a [z] sound.
·[j]apan : [j] sound was unclear. When you pronounce [j] sound, please make the shape of your mouth rounder than now.
·a[s]ia : [s] in this word has a [z] sound.
· [th] – when you pronounce [th] sound, please bite your tongue with more strength.
Ex) [th]at, [th]e
·other[s] : The ending sound was missed.
·sphe[r]es : [r] sound was weak.
·treati[s]ed : [s] sound was missed.
·med[i]cine : [i] sound in this word is more close [ㅓ] than [ㅣ].
2. Accent
·h[e]lpful : please put more accent at [e] sound.
·coll[e]ction : please put more accent at [e] sound.
3. Mission
·Let’s practice the presentation with more loud voice. I can perceive your voice is getting loud. If you let out a strong voice, you can raise the power of delivery.
·Please memorize more thoroughly than now. I already know you prepare the presentation for a long time and put lots of efforts. But you often stammer in the middle of the presentation. If you fully memorize the story, after than you can be more confident than now.
How devoted student you are! As I know you always take Monday Euphony class, even though it is a huge burden on you. Through this process, you can achieve more than others. Whenever you have a question, please feel free to ask me J