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Do you believe that sports can improve society further? I think sports can make society better.

First, sports have a lot of social development potential. Not only will it generate revenue for the sports team, but it will also create fans for the team, which will increase its hard consumption on things like the things the team used. This is because fans buy after their stuff. Then, economically, sports will have a good influence on society.

Second, when there is a World Cup or Olympics, people in each country can become closer through harmony. I could feel harmony when watching TV with my friends or family during the Olympics or the World Cup. Like this, sports allow family, friends, and even strangers to hold each other and enjoy themselves.

Finally, sports can benefit us while we do it. We feel better while playing sports, and we get healthy because we exercise. Relieving stress through sports and feeling better are also advantages that sports can have on our society.

I think sports can grow our society further through these advantages. Let's all play sports one by one!