Re: Max & Ruby summary-Yulia

[Teacher Winget]

Ruby made cupcakes hard with great effort.

Ruby said, "I will have a big sale today."

Ruby started to paint posters for cupcakes with blue color blue paint.

But Max's airplane went to Ruby flew into Ruby's poster, so Ruby painted red color accidentally added red paint on the poster.

But it's nice! But it turned out great!

Because red and blue mixed, it became mixed together, they created a purple color!

So Ruby painted poster well was able to finish the poster beautifully.

Max was interrupted to Ruby interrupted Ruby, but Max was of help to making posters actually helped make the posters.

Tye making posters finished Once the posters were done, Max gave to neighbors delivered them to the neighbors with Max's toys his toy airplane.

So Max helped Ruby!!

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Score: A-

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Tips):

1. 문법과 표현:

   • "hard" → "with great effort"
   • "painted red color" → "accidentally added red paint"
   • "was of help to making posters" → "actually helped make the posters"로 수정하세요.

2. 내용 추가하기:

   • Max가 이웃에게 포스터를 전달하면서 겪었던 재미있는 일을 상상해서 추가해 보세요.
   • Bunny Scout bake sale에서 Ruby의 컵케이크가 얼마나 인기가 있었는지 적어 보세요.

3. 문장 연결:

   • "Then," "Finally," 같은 연결어를 사용하면 문장이 더 부드럽게 이어질 수 있습니다.