첫번째 글
Heart for others
What is admire? Admire means to respect the personality, ideas, and actions of others. Then have you ever admired someone? In my case, there is one person who came to respect me through the drama 'Through the Darkness(악의 마음을 읽는 자들)’. This drama tells the story of the birth of Korea’s first profiler and the story of the profiler facing an unmotivated serial killer. As the story progresses, the main character struggles to get into the minds of criminals, but in the end he decides to continue doing this only for the sake of the victims and their families.
The reason I was impressed with this drama was that the main character's purpose and motivation were only to comfort the victims and their family. Yoo Seon-joo, a columnist for Cine 21, also said this about the drama. "In Korean investigative dramas, there are especially many police characters who lost their families to serial killers. I met this drama while watching the detective character who gains desperation only when his wife or lover dies, and often wonders whether the mind of an investigator who simply engraves the meaning of his job and works diligently was not worth dramatizing." ¹)
So, I thought that the quality that makes someone respectful is heart for others. To empathize with other people's work that has nothing to do with me and act for them. It is not an easy task, but it is worth it, and it will be a great comfort and support for others who have received help more than anything else.
¹) http://www.cine21.com/news/view/?mag_id=99579
피드백
김보경: 자신이 겪었던 일을 예시로 들어 흥미롭게 읽을 수 있어 좋았지만,주제에 대한 예시를 몇가지 추가해 작성하면 더 좋을 것 같습니다
두번째 글
Heart for others
What is admire? Admire means to respect the personality, ideas, and actions of others. Then have you ever admired someone?
In my case, there are a few people I admire. One of them is a person whom I respect through the drama 'Through the Darkness(악의 마음을 읽는 자들)’. This drama tells the story of the birth of Korea’s first profiler and the story of the profiler facing an unmotivated serial killer. As the story progresses, the main character struggles to get into the minds of criminals, but in the end he decides to continue doing this only for the sake of the victims and their families.
The reason I was impressed with this drama was that the main character's purpose and motivation were only to comfort the victims and their family. Yoo Seon-joo, a columnist for Cine 21, also said this about the drama. "In Korean investigative dramas, there are especially many police characters who lost their families to serial killers. I met this drama while watching the detective character who gains desperation only when his wife or lover dies, and often wonders whether the mind of an investigator who simply engraves the meaning of his job and works diligently was not worth dramatizing." ¹)
The other is a firefighter. On November 11, 2020, 'Firefighter Special' was aired on 'You Quiz on the Block'. Park Chi-woo, a paramedic at the Sokcho Fire Department, said about his mindset when working, "I think it's the weight of this outfit. I was worried, 'Can I make sacrifices for others?' But I got that heart and it got bigger and bigger and bigger. I was so busy holding onto the coffin that I turned off the lights and didn't even know how I turned it off."
So, I thought that the quality that makes someone respectful is heart for others. To empathize with other people's work that has nothing to do with me and act for them. It is not an easy task, but it is worth it, and it will be a great comfort and support for others who have received help more than anything else.
¹) http://www.cine21.com/news/view/?mag_id=99579
피드백 1 (김보경): 주제에 대한 예시를 추가했습니다. 수정한 부분은 밑줄로 표시했습니다.