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<td width=291 valign=top class="Normal"> <p><span style='font-size:11.0pt; font-family:Arial;color:#333333'>I watched a movie titled “The Bourne Identity” today. Matt Damon who is one of the actors I like is a leading actor and Franka Potente who comes from Germany is a leading actress. Before watching the movie, I thought that the story line of the movie is connected with psychodrama. Looking for a book titled “I, robot”, I caught a glimpse of a book titled “The Bourne Identity” by chance so I became to know the movie. <br>
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The story line of this movie is very simple. Bourne is founded by a crewman on the Mediterranean with gotten two bullets in his back. Rescuing by the seaman, he cannot remember his name or his past because he is taken amnesia. Trying to trace his past, he comes to know the fact that his past is related to an intelligence agency. <br>
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Watching the movie, I could not relax the tension of suspense even a moment. I would like to recommend this movie to you. I want to watch a movie called “The Bourne Supremacy” which is the sequence of “The Bourne Identity”. </span></p></td>
<td width=291 valign=top class="Normal"> <p><span style='font-size:11.0pt; font-family:Arial;color:#333333'>I watched a movie titled “The Bourne Identity” today. Matt Damon who is one of the actors I like is <span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-10-07T20:10">the </ins></span><span
class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-10-07T20:10">a</del></span> leading actor and Franka Potente who comes from Germany is <span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-10-07T20:10">the </ins></span><span
class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-10-07T20:10">a</del></span> leading actress. Before watching the movie, I thought that the story line of the movie is connected with psychodrama. Looking for a book titled “I, robot”, I caught a glimpse of a book titled “The Bourne Identity” by chance so I <span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-10-07T20:10">be</del></span>came to know <span class=msoIns><ins
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-10-07T20:10">about </ins></span>the movie. <br>
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The story line of this movie is very simple. Bourne is founded by a crewman on the Mediterranean with <span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-10-07T20:10">gotten</del></span> two bullets in his back. <span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-10-07T20:11">Being rescued </ins></span><span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-10-07T20:11">Rescuing</del></span> by <span class=msoIns><ins
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-10-07T20:11">a </ins></span><span
class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-10-07T20:11">the </del></span>seaman, he cannot remember his name <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-10-07T20:11">n</ins></span>or his past because he <span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-10-07T20:11">had </ins></span><span
class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-10-07T20:11">is</del></span> <span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-10-07T20:11">taken</del></span> amnesia. Trying to trace his past, he comes to know the fact that his past is related to an intelligence agency. <br>
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Watching the movie, I could not relax the tension of suspense even <span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-10-07T20:12">for </ins></span>a moment. I would like to recommend this movie to you. I want to watch a movie called “The Bourne Supremacy” which is the sequence of “The Bourne Identity”. </span></p></td>
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style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'> Excellent writing! </span></p>
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style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>Personal Comment:</span></b><span style='font-size:11.0pt; font-family:Arial'> Keep it up. I’m sorry it took so long to correct. </span></p></td>
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