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<td width=291 valign=top class="Normal"> <p><span style='font-size:11.0pt;
font-family:Arial;color:#333333'>I watched a movie titled “ the day after tomorrow” 2 months ago. The main story of the movie is about a natural disaster. The average temperature of earth is growing and it will be possible for unpredicted disaster to threaten all of the mankind. <br>
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I looked around Kyobo bookshop to buy English novel which content is related to films and found the book called “ the day after tomorrow”. I was not able to find more books, which I want to read, but that book. It was very helpful to read a book titled “ I Robot” because I could enjoy studying English by reading the book. I would like to read many fictions that are related a movie. <br>
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Reading a book called “ I, Robot”, I became to know that there were many words that I had never seen before. Though it was very hard to read the book without seeing the meaning of the words, I could understand the contents of the book. After reading the book, I felt that I achieved something. The more I read English novels, the more I will be able to feel something like impression or excitement. </span></p></td>
<td width=291 valign=top class="Normal"> <p><span style='font-size:11.0pt;
font-family:Arial;color:#333333'>I watched a movie titled “ the day after tomorrow” 2 months ago. The main story of the movie is about a natural disaster. The average temperature of earth is growing and it will be possible for unpredicted disaster to threaten all of the mankind. <br>
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I looked around Kyobo bookshop to buy <span class=msoIns><ins
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-10-07T20:46">an </ins></span>English novel <span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-10-07T20:46">which content is</del></span> related to films and found <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-10-07T20:46">a </ins></span><span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-10-07T20:46">the</del></span> book called “ the day after tomorrow”. I was not able to find more books, which I want to read, but that book. It was very helpful to read a book titled “ I Robot” because I could enjoy studying English by reading the book. I would like to read many fictions that are related <span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-10-07T20:47">a</del></span> movie<span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-10-07T20:47">s</ins></span>. <br>
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Reading a book called “ I, Robot”, I became to know that there were many words that I had never seen before. Though it was very hard to read the book without <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-10-07T20:47">looking up </ins></span><span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-10-07T20:47">seeing</del></span> the meaning of the words, I could understand the contents of the book. After reading the book, I felt that I <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-10-07T20:47">had </ins></span>achieved something. The more I read English novels, the more I will be able to feel <span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-10-07T20:47">something like </del></span><span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-10-07T20:47">good about myself. </ins></span><span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-10-07T20:48">impression or excitement.</del></span> </span></p></td>
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<td width=581 colspan=2 valign=top class="Normal"> <p style='line-height:14.0pt;'><b><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>Comment:</span></b><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'> Excellent work! </span></p>
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style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>Personal Comment:</span></b><span style='font-size:11.0pt; font-family:Arial'> Reading is a great way to study English. Keep it up.</span></p></td>
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