Re: Noah-Max and Ruby

[Teacher Winget]

The title of this story is "Camp Out."

The main characters are Max and Ruby.

One hot day, Ruby and Max decided to sleep in a tent outside. Max goes went to get a flashlight, while Ruby set up the tent. Max brings brought a sleeping bag, radio, books, toys, and pillows. In the evening, Ruby brings brought marshmallows, and in the meantime, Max puts the toy into the tent filled the tent with toys, so they sleep outside ended up sleeping outside.

I think this book is funny, and I think Max is a little wanton mischievous.

Grade: B

Tips:

1. Use past tense consistently (went, brought, set up, filled, ended).
2. Ensure clarity in your sentences.
3. Use appropriate vocabulary (mischievous instead of wanton).
4. Add more details to enhance the story.