Today's story title is "Caillou's Hiding Place." Oneday One day, Caillou's parents were went went away for a few days. Then,Caillou's Then, Caillou's grandparents took care of Caillou and Rosie. And Caillou wanted to hide in a secret place. So, Grand father saw to Caillou a inside tree Grandfather showed Caillou a place inside a tree. The inside the tree, Caillou was can enter Caillou could go inside the tree. And Grandfather gave a flashlight to Caillou. Then, Caillou loved the place, and nobody can't could enter Caillou's special place. When Caillou was playing inside the tree, he found a toy. It turns out, the toy was Caillou's daddys daddy's toy.
Score: B+
Tips)
- 문법: "Grandfather saw to Caillou" 대신 "Grandfather showed Caillou"라고 해야 해요.
- 내용 추가: "Caillou는 왜 그 장소를 좋아했을까요? 아마도 자신만의 비밀 장소를 가지고 싶었을 거예요!"