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부모님의 영향으로....... 아래 문법적으로 맞는 문장인가요??
influenced my parents, now responsibility which is my strong key to explain my character.
이건 무슨말을 하려고 하시는지 잘 모르겠는데..
부모님의 영향으로 책임감있는 사람이라고 말하고 싶은건가요?
그러면..
The word "responsbility' is right word to explain my personality which I totally got influenced
by my parents.
(근데 왜 책임감 있는 사람이 됬는지 이유나 경험을 써주면 좀 더 설득력있게
받아드려질것 같습니다.)
바이어로써 구매부서에서 근무했고 경쟁력 있는 단가와 좋은 품질로 구매 작업을 했었다.
I worked as a buyer at the purchasing department and my purchasing pursuit at competitive price
and good quality was performed successfully.
(이 부분은 잘쓰셔서 고칠게 별로 없었어요. 좀더 다듬기만했을뿐..)
이러한 경험은 무역의 흐름을 익히게 해줬고...
These valuable experiences made me learing trade flows and overcoming
the troubles that I could never figured out before.
직원들과 사장에게 신뢰를 받고 있다..
Therefore I am an employee who shows trustful image to my boss and entire staffs.
(이부분도 좋았어요.)
In addition, during my extensive experience including several part time job, extracurricular activity, travelling on oversea,
In addition, I have earned various experiences through many different types of part time job,
tutoring and travelling to oversea and these experiences will be one of my benefits at work.
(과외활동을 쓸땐 주로 tutoring 이란 단어를 많이 씁니다)