Re: Caillou's Hiding Place. Adam

[Teacher Winget]

The title is "Caillou's Hiding Place." Caillou want to Hiding wanted to hide under the place a place, but Caillou was big was too big. Caillou want to Hiding wanted to hide in a hiding place. Grandfather know knew a special hiding place. It was in the tree. The place was big, and Caillou 's move up into the tree climbed into the tree. Caillou 's find a new Charactors found some new characters. It old days dad toys They were Dad's old toys. The story is about how I want to have a secret place! The story is good.

Score: B

Tips)

1. 문법: "Caillou want to Hiding" 대신 "Caillou wanted to hide"라고 해야 해요.
2. 내용 추가: 왜 Caillou는 큰 나무 속의 그 장소를 특별하게 느꼈을까요? 더 설명해 볼 수 있어요. "아빠의 오래된 장난감을 발견했기 때문에 특별했을 거예요!"