<P>리드:I bought a keyboard(musical instrument)</P>
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<P>방법:I bought a keyboard by internet shopping.</P>
<P>시간:I bought a keyboard by internet shopping today.<BR></P>
<P>상황:It was fantastic.</P>
<P>결과:I can practice piano until late.</P>
<P>느낌:I was very happy and I want to know about its function<BR>의지:I will practice piano a lot.</P>
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<P>종합</P>
<P>-I bought a keyboard by internet shopping yesterday.</P>
<P>It was fantastic because it can make many sounds.</P>
<P>I can practice piano until late because I can change volume.</P>
<P>I was very happy because I can practice it until late.</P>
<P>Also, I want to know about its function.</P>
<P>I will practice piano a lot.</P>
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첫댓글by internet shopping => on internet 이 자연스럽습니다 ^^ I can practice piano until late because I can change volume. => ??? 소리 조절을 할 수 있는것이 왜 피아노를 늦도록 연습할 수 있게 해 주었는지 내용을 더 넣어주어야해요.
Good job~! Keep doing it ^^ You have potentiality. Go go !! 일기는 [내키영어실전글쓰기]메뉴에 있는 [영어일기쓰기 메뉴]를 사용하세요 ^^ 지도가 끝난 후 일기를 [내키Shawn과 함께] 메뉴에 있는 [Keep the revised diary] 에 옮겨서 완성하세요. ㅎ ctrl C / ctrl V
첫댓글 by internet shopping => on internet 이 자연스럽습니다 ^^
I can practice piano until late because I can change volume. => ??? 소리 조절을 할 수 있는것이 왜 피아노를 늦도록 연습할 수 있게 해 주었는지 내용을 더 넣어주어야해요.
Good job~! Keep doing it ^^ You have potentiality. Go go !!
일기는 [내키영어실전글쓰기]메뉴에 있는 [영어일기쓰기 메뉴]를 사용하세요 ^^
지도가 끝난 후 일기를 [내키Shawn과 함께] 메뉴에 있는 [Keep the revised diary] 에 옮겨서 완성하세요. ㅎ ctrl C / ctrl V
Um~~ You bought a keyboard ~~ Let me hear later~~