Re: 1c66 summary (Ruby)

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Bill Gates is one of the world's best known businessmen. He helped invent Microsoft.
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He was born on October 28, 1955, in Washington. He loved computers.
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When Bill was 18, he enrolled at Harvard University. And He left to start his company with his friend Paul Allen.
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Bill and Paul Started started Microsoft. The system which first launched in 1985. The system was first launched in 1985.
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Bill's invention is using used on most ot of the world's computers.
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