<p>During King Gyeonsun's rule, people had a problem. Hyeongsan River couldn't flow to <s>sea</s> <b>the sea</b>.</p><p>설명: 바다는 하나라서 the를 써요.</p><p>The <s>King</s> <b>king</b> ordered his people <s>ti</s> <b>to</b> dig a sluice. They tried but failed. <s>King</s> <b>The king</b> was sad.</p><p>설명: to 철자가 틀렸어요 / king 앞에는 the를 붙여요.</p><p>He <s>premise</s> <b>promised</b> to turn into a dragon after he died. <s>King</s> <b>The king</b> died and transformed into a dragon.</p><p>설명: promise의 과거형은 promised예요 / king 앞에 the 필요해요.</p><p>Yugeumi saw the dragon split a mountain. <s>He</s> <b>He was</b> surprised.</p><p>설명: surprised 앞에는 was가 필요해요.</p><p>Later, the plain was named Yugeumi Plain. And the two <s>mountain</s> <b>mountains</b> became Mount Hyeong and Je.</p><p>설명: two 뒤에는 복수형 mountains를 써요.</p><p>점수: <b>A-</b></p><p>Tips)<br>이야기 흐름이 잘 이어지고 있어요 👍</p><ul style="list-style-type: disc;" data-ke-list-type="disc"><li>king 앞에는 the를 자주 붙여요</li><li>과거 이야기니까 동사에 -ed 잘 붙이기</li><li>two, many 뒤에는 복수형 쓰기!</li></ul>
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