<p style="text-align: left;">The title of this story is Max and Ruby <br>Max and Ruby play hide and seek .<br>but Max doesn't know the rules. <br>so Ruby teaches how he can play .<br>so first hide is Max <br>Ruby closed her eyes and told number ten <br>Max hides flowerpot, but Ruby finds the Max. <br>Now, the next player is Max, but Max doesn't know the answer, so Ruby teaches again, but Max hides one more .<br>Max hides the closet. <br>but Ruby finds the Max.<br>Now Max finds the Ruby, but Ruby eats the cookies now. Max finds the ruby.<br>I think this book is very fun </p>
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Max and Ruby play hide and seek, but Max doesn't know the rules. So Ruby teaches (how he can play) him how he can play.
So, the first to hide is Max. Ruby closes her eyes and (told) counts to ten. Max hides (flowerpot,) behind a flowerpot, but Ruby finds (the) Max.
Now it's Max's turn to find Ruby, but Max doesn't know (the answer,) how to do it, so Ruby teaches (again,) him again. But Max hides one more (.) time. This time, Max hides (the closet.) in the closet, but Ruby finds (the) Max.
첫댓글 The title of this story is "Max and Ruby."
Max and Ruby play hide and seek, but Max doesn't know the rules. So Ruby teaches (how he can play) him how he can play.
So, the first to hide is Max. Ruby closes her eyes and (told) counts to ten. Max hides (flowerpot,) behind a flowerpot, but Ruby finds (the) Max.
Now it's Max's turn to find Ruby, but Max doesn't know (the answer,) how to do it, so Ruby teaches (again,) him again. But Max hides one more (.) time. This time, Max hides (the closet.) in the closet, but Ruby finds (the) Max.
Now Max tries to find Ruby, but Ruby is eating cookies (now.) now. Max finds (the) Ruby.
I think this book is very fun.
Teacher's comments
The content of the episode is missing in some parts.
Don't write a conclusion all of sudden!