<p>After thirteen years together, the Beatles decided to be break up.</p><p>The <span><span>Beatles</span></span>, otherwise known as the Fab Four, played their first gig in a basement.</p><p>In 1963, the group recorded their first album in one day!</p><p>Suddenly, Great Britain exploded with “Beatlemania.”</p><p>They were so popular, they even starred in movies.</p><p>Sadly, the 1960s were troubling times.</p><p>The Beatles helped influence the peace movement.</p><p>After thirteen years together, the Beatles decided to <s>be break up</s> <b>break up</b>.</p><p><b>Score: A-</b></p><p><b>Tips)</b><br>문장들이 아주 잘 연결되어 있어요! 마지막 문장은 “decided to + 동사원형”이라서 <b>break up</b>처럼 써야 해요.<br>비틀즈가 어떤 노래로 유명한지도 한 문장 더 쓰면 더 좋아요!</p><p> </p>
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