Re: 1c 67 youl

[Sub tutor 1]

The betle Beatles played played their first consert concert in basement a basement.
→ “Beatles”는 철자 확인! “concert”, “a basement”처럼 관사도 필요해요.

In 1963, they recored recorded their first album one day in one day.
→ “recorded” 철자, “in one day(하루 만에)”로 써요.

They so popular were so popular they started starred at movie in a movie.
→ “were” 필요! “starred in a movie”가 맞아요.

They do did their last show on a rooftop.
→ 과거 이야기라서 “did” 사용해요.

They liked hey jude liked “Hey Jude”.
→ 노래 제목은 대문자 + 따옴표로 써요.

In today Today, people remind they today remember them.
→ “remember them(그들을 기억하다)”으로 써요.

Score: B+

Tips)
문장을 잘 만들었어요! 😊

• 과거 이야기라서 **동사를 과거형(was, did, recorded)**으로 써야 해요.
• “the Beatles”처럼 이름 철자 꼭 확인해요!
• 마지막 문장은 “people remember them”처럼 간단하게 쓰면 좋아요!