Essay -Calvin-

[신승식]

In the world exist many racial such as a white, a black and the yellow face.

And, in the past there were much discrimination. Especially segregation was the badest problem.

In the past, in USA, there were much dispute about discrimination. Many white people ignored black people and think withe are better than black.

However, today , in fact, racial discrimination reduce so much. White almost don't ignore black and they think the same racial. Of course, there are some racial discriminations now. For example, sometime black become a part of gag. Theay are expressed very ludicrous. However if black are used a part of gag, people wourldwide will blame the media.

Resultingly, we know racial discrimination isn't very moral.

We know it isn't right. So we must not draw people. And we should know every racial are same.

Then we can live more happily and peaceful.

[Danny]

In the world exist many racial-->In the world, there are many races
a white, a black and the yellow face-->white, black and yellow
badest-->worst
and think withe are better than black-->and thought whites were better than blacks
However, today , in fact, racial discrimination reduce-->However, today, racial discrimination has reduced
White almost don't ignore black-->Whites almost always don't ignore blacks
think the same racial-->think races are equal
sometime black become-->sometimes blacks become
Theay are expressed very ludicrous-->They are expressed as very ludicrous
black are->blacks are

[Danny]

every racial are same-->All races are equal