<p> </p><p>The <span><span>Beatles</span></span>, otherwise known as the Fab Four <s>.</s> <b>, were a famous band.</b><br>→ 문장이 끝나지 않아 설명을 이어줘야 해요.</p><p>They played rock and blues.<br>→ 문장이 자연스러워요.</p><p><span><span>George Harrison</span></span> kept strumming, and <span><span>Ringo Starr</span></span> kept drumming.<br>→ 아주 잘 썼어요!</p><p>In 1963, the Beatles recorded their first album.<br>→ 문장이 자연스러워요.</p><p>Many fans heard their songs.<br>→ 문장이 자연스러워요.</p><p>They were so popular.<br>→ 문장이 자연스러워요.</p><p>They even starred in <s>Yellow Submarin</s> <b>“Yellow Submarine”</b>.<br>→ 철자와 대문자, 따옴표를 맞춰요.</p><p>Sadly, <s>The Beatles</s> <b>the Beatles</b> decided to break up.<br>→ 문장 중간에서는 소문자로 써요.</p><p><s>Beatles was</s> <b>The Beatles were</b> <s>so popular singers</s> <b>very popular singers</b>.<br>→ “were” 사용 + “very popular singers”가 자연스러워요.</p><p><b>Score: A-</b></p><p><b>Tips)</b><br>글이 아주 잘 이어져요! 😊</p><ul style="list-style-type: disc;" data-ke-list-type="disc"><li>“The Beatles was → were”처럼 <b>복수는 were</b>를 써요.</li><li>“Yellow Submarine”처럼 <b>이름은 대문자 + 정확한 철자</b>!</li><li>첫 문장은 <b>완전한 문장으로 마무리</b>하면 더 좋아요!</li></ul><p> </p>
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