Hello Elly
I am Rina : )
I was exceedingly happy with you and felt honorable to see you again
in Monday Euphony Class
Though it was your second time of delivering presentation in the class, I was presently amazed by your skyrocketing improvement.
I was utterly grateful to see your developed performance after fixing your weak points that I mentioned last week.
For more fresh presentation, I would like to leave some constructive advices as follows.
1) Pronunciation
- perio[d]
‘d’ sound is not precise to catch.
- [r]ose cont[r]olled
With round shape of lips, rolled up your tongue and put the chin down.
- [v]ision
Put your upper teeth on your lip sligtly and make a sound with vibration like a ‘bee sound’ by letting out air.
- f[ai]l appr[oa]ch
More stretch [ai], [oa] vowel sound
- ea[ch] approa[ch]
When it comes to sound [ch] you should pull out your lips straight like [우] and make a sound like [취]
- [wh]ich
[wh] sound is unclear. Pliz check it out again : )
- c[ow]s
I highly recommend you to access to www.m-w.com for checking sound c[ow]
[ow]sound of word 'cow' is pronounced to [아-우] rather than [워-우]
2) Mission
How amazing you are. This time your presentation dramatically improved. I found you trying to keep the pace more slower than before. But to tell you the truth, this time you couldn’t performed your own ability cause of other job. I guess you might become nervous because of few mistakes. Your speed ended up getting faster. Don’t worryJ. At least you tried and I recognized your tremendous amount of efforts to fix them and full potential room to overcome them.
Why don’t you give it a try to make a mouth more wider. It could help you make a more clear sound.
Thanks profusely for your second presentation again Elly
You are the one and only presenter who attended two times on end in my class.
I am utterly thankful your strong devotion and passionate will .
If you have any question or difficulties to understand above,
Feel free to ask me anytime anywhere
I firmly believe Whatever happens to you, given any question, You can handle it.
I always root for you. Elly : )