Today's book title is "Caillou and Gilbert." Oneday One day, Caillou was very boring very bored, so he wanted to play with someone. And Caillou went to Rosie, but Rosie was take taking a nap, so he couldn't play with Rosie. Then, Caillou went to his parents, but they were busy. And Caillou was felt upset Caillou felt upset. But Caillou remembered playing with Gilbert. When Caillou tried to play with Gilbert, Gilbert was didin't didn't like it because Gilbert is a cat, but Caillou was playing as if with a person. Then, Caillou knew that Caillou realized this. And Caillou and Gilbert played with use the ball a ball.
Score: B+
Tips)
- 문법: "was take a nap" 대신 "was taking a nap"라고 해야 하고, "And Caillou was felt upset" 대신 "Caillou felt upset"이라고 해야 자연스럽습니다.
- 내용 추가: "Caillou가 어떻게 Gilbert와 상호작용하며 더 나은 놀이를 찾았는지 설명을 추가해 보세요!"