Re:Writing Homework: Write all the things which are fun and easy to do that cannot be helpful in the future.

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    There are lots of exciting things to do. I can play soccer and computer games. I think to play soccer is better than            computer games. However, there are lots of bad things, too. Good thing is exciting and good for our future. Bad things can     exciting but not good fot our future. Little things are bigger and bigger, so we have to make good habits. Also, my dad says to me "you have to make good and effective habits, and I knew good habits are good for our future. Also I know that good habits can exerciseing and diligent.

There are lots of exciting things to do that are fun and easy. I can play soccer and computer games. I think to play soccer is better than playing computer games. Because playing soccer could be more fun for the reason that it helps us develop our physical features and we could have good body shape. While in playing computer games we only spend time facing the computer, only our hands are working, we do not use other parts of the body and our mental ability is not too useful too. However, there are lots of bad things too as we play this game, like we might get hurt while playing these extra powerful sports like soccer because it’s too physically powerful game. Bad things can be exciting but not good for our future. Little things becomes bigger someday, so we have to be good and do good habits, Also, my dad says to me "you have to make good and effective habits”, and I knew good things are good for our future and good habits can be effective if we do it with action and be diligent.

COMMENT:

Very good writing! I like your initiative but you have to be careful in answering question you have to explain and elaborate your answers so that the thought would be more reasonable.