Re: 2A 022 (Jia)

[Sub Tutor 3]

The title of this book is "The Grand Canyon."

Located in the United States, Arizona is home to one of the Seven Wonders of the Natural World. Canyons are usually formed over millions of years by river, rain, and wind erosion. The first Europeans to set eyes on the Grand Canyon were Spanish explorers in 1540. The Grand Canyon isn't only known for its great hiking trails and breathtaking cliff views. In 1966, animal figurines made from split twigs were discovered inside caves at the Grand Canyon. Gazing at the picturesque landscape isn't the only thing to do at the Grand Canyon. Don't forget to watch the sunset from the caboose. This book is very fun.

Grade: B+

Tips:

• Ensure all verbs are in the correct tense.
• Use more descriptive words to make the conclusion stronger.