Re: 2A 022 Luna

[Sub Tutor 3]

The title of the book is The Grand Canyon. Did you know the Grand Canyon?

Today, I will teach you what the Grand Canyon is.

The Grand Canyon is located in the United States.

The Canyon's layers of rocks show over 2,000 million years of Earth's history.

Europeans explored the Grand Canyon in 1540.

But it didn't have water, so they quickly returned on their way.

The Grand Canyon has many animals, such as bald eagles, mountain lions, elks, etc. Wooden sculptures show how many times people lived in the Grand Canyon.

When you go to the Grand Canyon, you can do many things, such as biking along the way, rafting along the Canyon's river, etc. I think this story is interesting.

Grade: B

Tips:

• Correct grammatical errors for better clarity.
• Provide more details about activities and why the story is interesting.
• Use descriptive language to make the writing more engaging.

[Teacher1]

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