Re: jadoo youl

[Teacher Winget]

Today I will tail 𝗍𝖾𝗅𝗅 you a 𝖺 Jadoo story.

Minjy 𝗠𝗶𝗻𝗷𝗶 and Jadoo go 𝗐𝖾𝗇𝗍 to play a game.

While Minjy go 𝗠𝗶𝗻𝗷𝗶 𝗐𝖾𝗇𝗍 to her acdemy 𝖺𝖼𝖺𝖽𝖾𝗆𝗒, Jadoo still play 𝗌𝗍𝗂𝗅𝗅 𝗉𝗅𝖺𝗒𝖾𝖽 a game.

At home she thought 𝗍𝗁𝗈𝗎𝗀𝗁𝗍 𝖺𝖻𝗈𝗎𝗍 the game.

The next day Jadoo steal 𝗌𝗍𝗈𝗅𝖾 her brother's money.

And she didn't come at 𝖼𝗈𝗆𝖾 𝗁𝗈𝗆𝖾.

Her family brought her to 𝗮 Boot Camp.

And now she didn't do game 𝗱𝗶𝗱𝗻'𝘁 𝗽𝗹𝗮𝘆 𝗴𝗮𝗺𝗲𝘀.

Score: A-

Tips)
• 과거 이야기이므로 went, played, stole처럼 과거형을 써요.
• “come home”이라고 말해요. “come at home”은 쓰지 않아요.
• “think about”은 “~에 대해 생각하다”라는 뜻이에요.
• 왜 Jadoo가 게임을 그만두게 되었는지 한 문장 더 쓰면 이야기가 더 재미있어요!

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