<p><span style="color: #313131;"><span>The primary reason is that ride-sharing is flexibility.</span><br>To be specific, it is free of time and place.</span><span style="color: #313131;">For example, When I traveled Gyeongju, I missed a lot of bus because I mistaked its time.</span><span style="color: #313131;">So, I use an app like Uber, then I could enjoy the travel. I didn't need to check a bus time, and find a bus stop.</span><span style="color: #313131;">In other words, I saved my stamina and time by using ride-sharing service. </span><span style="color: #313131;">I think it is hard to find these advantages on other transportations such as bus, subway and train.</span></p><p><span style="color: #313131;"><span>For these aforementioned reasons, I believe that more and more people will use ride-sharing survices in the future overally.   </span></span></p>
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첫댓글 Introduction with the topic is needed.
"Regarding this topic, I believe that ride-sharing with applications is one of the most revoultionary transportation methods in recent years."
"It is the system's flexibility that makes me think like this."
What is the best part of the method is flexibility.
#flexible 형용사 flexibility 명사
be 동사 다음에 어법으로는 둘 다 가능하지만
동격의 의미일때는 "명사"
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