The The Beatles, otherwise Known known as the Fab Four, playe played their first gig in a basement.
“known”은 소문자, “playe” → “played”로 고쳐요.
John Lennon and Paul McCartney kept composinf composing unique pop songs.
“composinf” → “composing”으로 철자를 고쳐요.
In 1963, they recorded their first album.
문장이 자연스러워요.
They were so popular, they even starred in movie a movie.
movie 앞에는 “a”를 써요.
Sadly, the 1960s were troubling times.
문장이 자연스러워요.
People were fighting.
문장이 자연스러워요.
They perform performed at looftop a rooftop in London.
과거이므로 “performed”, “looftop” → “rooftop”, “a”를 붙여요.
The Beatles produced many song songs.
많은 것은 복수형 “songs”를 써요.
People of all ages and races still worship their music today.
문장이 자연스러워요.