<p>This story was about Jadoo <s>play</s> 𝗽𝗹𝗮𝘆𝗶𝗻𝗴 <b>an arcade</b> game.</p><p>Jadoo <s>play</s> 𝗽𝗹𝗮𝘆𝗲𝗱 the <s>run</s> 𝗮𝗿𝗰𝗮𝗱𝗲 game and <s>game addicition</s> 𝗯𝗲𝗰𝗮𝗺𝗲 𝗮𝗱𝗱𝗶𝗰𝘁𝗲𝗱 𝘁𝗼 𝗶𝘁.</p><p>Jadoo <s>play</s> 𝗽𝗹𝗮𝘆𝗲𝗱 games <s>to night</s> 𝗮𝘁 𝗻𝗶𝗴𝗵𝘁.</p><p>Jadoo went to the <s>boot camping</s> 𝗯𝗼𝗼𝘁 𝗰𝗮𝗺𝗽.</p><p>Jadoo <s>was a good</s> 𝗴𝗼𝘁 𝗯𝗲𝘁𝘁𝗲𝗿.</p><p>Jadoo <s>cealred run game</s> 𝗾𝘂𝗶𝘁 𝗽𝗹𝗮𝘆𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗮𝗿𝗰𝗮𝗱𝗲 𝗴𝗮𝗺𝗲𝘀.</p><p>I think this story was fun.</p><p>Score: <b>B+</b></p><p>Tips)<br>• 과거 이야기이므로 <b>played, got</b>처럼 과거형을 써요.<br>• “boot camp”는 두 단어로 써요.<br>• “at night”은 “밤에”라는 뜻이에요.<br>• 마지막에 Jadoo가 어떻게 게임을 끊었는지 쓰면 이야기가 더 완성돼요!</p>
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