<p>Jadoo <s>play</s> 𝗽𝗹𝗮𝘆𝗲𝗱 a runner game.</p><p>She <s>is talked play</s> 𝘀𝗮𝗶𝗱 𝘀𝗵𝗲 𝘄𝗼𝘂𝗹𝗱 𝗽𝗹𝗮𝘆 only one round.</p><p>But she <s>is play</s> 𝗽𝗹𝗮𝘆𝗲𝗱 for many hours.</p><p>She <s>take</s> 𝘁𝗼𝗼𝗸 a baby's <s>piggy back</s> 𝗽𝗶𝗴𝗴𝘆 𝗯𝗮𝗻𝗸.</p><p>She saw a runner game character.</p><p>She wanted to <s>won</s> 𝘄𝗶𝗻, <s>Then</s> 𝘀𝗼 she ran as fast <b>as</b> she could.</p><p>She <s>is won</s> 𝘄𝗼𝗻, so she stopped <s>shaking</s> 𝗽𝗹𝗮𝘆𝗶𝗻𝗴.</p><p>Score: <b>B</b></p><p>Tips)<br>• 과거 이야기이므로 <b>played, took, wanted</b>처럼 과거형을 써요.<br>• “wanted to” 뒤에는 <b>win</b>처럼 동사 원형을 써요.<br>• “piggy bank”는 돼지 저금통이라는 뜻이에요.<br>• 마지막에 왜 게임을 그만두었는지 한 문장 더 쓰면 이야기가 더 좋아져요!</p>
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