Re: Logan's Summary / 2A-022

[Teacher1]

Introduction: The title of this book is 'The Grand Canyon'. Have you ever heard about the Grand Canyon?

Body: The Grand Canyon, which is located in the United States, was usually formed over millions of years by river, rain, or wind erosion. The Spanish explorers were the first Europeans to search for the Seven Cities of Gold in 1540. The Canyon isn't only known for its great hiking trails and breathtaking cliffs views, but also for its special animals such as Bald Eagles and Canyon Rattlesnakes. In 1966, the animal figurines that humans used in the Canyon thousands of years ago were discovered.

Conclusion: There are many adventures we can do there. I want to raft along the Colorado River! I will go to the Grand Canyon someday.

Grade: B

Tips:

• Capitalize proper nouns like "Grand Canyon" and "Bald Eagles".
• Check your spelling carefully (erosion, breathtaking).
• Use "the" before "Grand Canyon" when referring to it specifically.
• Add more details about the animal figurines discovered.
• Consider mentioning why you want to raft along the Colorado River.
• Try to include more specific facts about the Grand Canyon's size or depth.

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