Re: Caillou summary-Ellie

[Teacher Winget]

Today's story title is "Caillou's Summer Goodnight."
While Caillou was playing alone, His grandmother was came to Caillou's house his grandmother came to Caillou's house because Caillou's parents were went to work Caillou's parents went to work.
Theirs grandmother Their grandmother played games with Caillou and Rosie. When go to bed time it was bedtime, Caillou brush brushed his teeth and his grandmother read the story a story to Caillou and Rosie.
While his grandma was telling a story to him, Caillou fell a sleep fast asleep quickly.
But Caillou was waked about woke up because of a doll. He dosen't fell a sleep one more couldn’t fall asleep again because out side was it was very bright outside.
Then, His grandmather cover his grandmother covered the windows, and Caillou was fell a sleep one more fell asleep again.

Score: B+

Tips)

1. 문법: "was came" 대신 "came," "were went" 대신 "went," "brush" 대신 "brushed"라고 해야 자연스럽습니다.
2. 내용 추가: "Caillou가 왜 잠에서 깼는지와 그의 할머니가 어떻게 그를 도왔는지에 대한 세부 사항을 추가해 보세요!"