<p style="text-align: left;">This story title is "Caillou's all alone." One day Cailliu wants to play with his mom. But Caillou's mom is busy so Cailliou wants helps his mom. And mom said "It is very difficult. play with your dad." so Caillou is go to his dad. But his dad is fixed a washingmachine Suddenly, a bubble came out of the washing machine, and Kalu played a joke on him. And dad said " I am busy so go to your grand mother.But grand mother is going to Roise's nep so grand mother said "go to play with your cat Gillbert." And Caillougo to GilbertBut Gillbert leave Caillou. Caillou think ' Maybe My mom is finished counting.' so Cailliu go to her. But his mom is busy. So Caillou play with his doll. </p>
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첫댓글This story title is "Caillou's all alone." (This story title is "Caillou's all alone.") One day (Cailliu) Caillou wants to play with his mom. But Caillou's mom is busy, so (Cailliou) Caillou wants to help his mom. And (mom said) Mom said, "It is very difficult. Play with your dad." So Caillou is going to his dad. But his dad (fixed) is fixing a washing machine. Suddenly, a bubble (came out) comes out of the washing machine, and (Kalu) Caillou plays a joke on him. And Dad said, "I am busy so go to your (grand mother) grandmother."
But (grand mother) grandmother is giving Rosie a nap. (Roise's nep) so (grand mother) grandmother said, "Go to play with your cat (Gillbert) Gilbert." And Caillou went to Gilbert, but (Gillbert) Gilbert left Caillou. Caillou thought, "Maybe my mom is finished (counting)." So (Cailliu) Caillou goes to her. But his mom is busy. So Caillou plays with his doll.
첫댓글 This story title is "Caillou's all alone." (This story title is "Caillou's all alone.") One day (Cailliu) Caillou wants to play with his mom. But Caillou's mom is busy, so (Cailliou) Caillou wants to help his mom. And (mom said) Mom said, "It is very difficult. Play with your dad." So Caillou is going to his dad. But his dad (fixed) is fixing a washing machine. Suddenly, a bubble (came out) comes out of the washing machine, and (Kalu) Caillou plays a joke on him. And Dad said, "I am busy so go to your (grand mother) grandmother."
But (grand mother) grandmother is giving Rosie a nap. (Roise's nep) so (grand mother) grandmother said, "Go to play with your cat (Gillbert) Gilbert." And Caillou went to Gilbert, but (Gillbert) Gilbert left Caillou. Caillou thought, "Maybe my mom is finished (counting)." So (Cailliu) Caillou goes to her. But his mom is busy. So Caillou plays with his doll.
Teacher's comments
You wrote well with details but missed "ending". Was Calliou sad or happy at the ending?