Re: Caillou-Andy

[Teacher Winget]

This story's title is "Caillou's Summer Goodnight."

One day, Caillou's grandmother came to Caillou's house.

Caillou and his grandmother played dolls for Rosie with dolls for Rosie.

Next, Caillou washed washed up and prepared to sleep.

Caillou's grandmother came into Caillou's room and read a book to Caillou him.

In that way, Caillou was sleeping, Gilbert came up to Caillou's head, and Caillou woke up.
While Caillou was sleeping, Gilbert came onto Caillou's head, and Caillou woke up.

Caillou tried to sleep again, but he couldn't sleep, so he sat down on Caillou's teddy bear sat with his teddy bear, but he couldn't sleep still couldn’t sleep.

Then Caillou's grandmother came into Caillou's room, and Caillou told his grandmother that he couldn't sleep.

Caillou's grandmother covered the window covered the window with a curtain.

That's how Caillou slept well.

Score: B+

Tips)

1. 문법: "Caillou was sleeping, Gilbert came up to Caillou's head" 대신 "While Caillou was sleeping, Gilbert came onto Caillou's head"라고 해야 자연스럽습니다.
2. 내용 추가: "Caillou가 왜 잠을 잘 수 없었는지와 할머니가 문제를 해결하기 위해 무엇을 했는지 더 자세히 설명해 보세요!"