<p>Jadoo and <s>her's</s> 𝗵𝗲𝗿 friends went <b>to</b> <b>their</b> grandma**'s** house.</p><p>They <s>did loser buy a snack</s> 𝗽𝗹𝗮𝘆𝗲𝗱 <b>a</b> loser buys <b>the</b> snack <b>game</b>.</p><p>The loser <s>is a</s> 𝘄𝗮𝘀 Jadoo!</p><p>Jadoo wanted <s>a</s> banana milk**,** but it**** <s>'s</s> 𝘄𝗮𝘀 sold out.</p><p>So she bought chocolate chips, spicy corn**,** and butter chips.</p><p>She wanted <s>out</s> 𝘁𝗼 𝗴𝗼 𝗼𝘂𝘁, but the door <s>is looked</s> 𝘄𝗮𝘀 𝗹𝗼𝗰𝗸𝗲𝗱.</p><p>Jadoo <b>was</b> in <b>the</b> bathroom**,** but <b>the</b> light <b>was</b> off and <b>the</b> door <b>was</b> locked.</p><p>The ghost pulled <s>Mingi</s> 𝗠𝗶𝗻𝗷𝗶.</p><p>The four ghosts <s>attached the Jadoo and her's friends</s> 𝗮𝘁𝘁𝗮𝗰𝗸𝗲𝗱 Jadoo and <s>her's</s> 𝗵𝗲𝗿 friends.</p><p>This story was scary.</p><p>Score: <b>A-</b></p><p>Tips)<br>• “her”를 써요. <b>her's</b>는 쓰지 않아요.<br>• “was locked”는 “잠겨 있었다”라는 뜻이에요.<br>• “grandma's house”처럼 사람 뒤에는 <b>'s</b>를 붙여요.<br>• 유령을 만난 뒤 친구들이 어떻게 했는지 쓰면 이야기가 더 재미있어요!</p>
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