Vol.2) Chomsongdae - Ella

봐 주셔서 감사합니다...!

Intro)

I'm curious about your favorite city in South Korea.

For which region do you have a strong-liking?

For me, the answer goes to "Kyongju".

For the past few years, I had a couple of chances to go on a trip to Kyongju with my friends or family.

I would ride a bicycle there, laping around the Pomun Lake, passing by a peaceful and still a bit pastoral scenary of it.

Indeed, except for the beautiful scenary, Kyongju is also known as a huge museum without walls, housing numerous relics of its ancient past throughout the city.

From now on, let me introduce to you one of the most remarkable artifacts of Kyongju, the world's oldest surviving observatory, Chomsongdae.

Outro)

That's all for description of Chomsongdae.

The weather thesedays is cool enough to do something outdoors.

On a day like this, the best thing for us to do would be to go on a cycle trip to Kyongju, not to mention the place where Chomsongdae is located.

Let us go right now! Thank you.

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Self comments)

-도입부에서 문장 시작할 때 'For'를 너무 많이 씀

-observe, observation, observatory => 발음이 ob[g]erv- 로 굳어서 [z] 발음을 내기 힘들고, 입모양도 자꾸 앞으로 모아짐

-말할 때 입이랑 주변 근육에 너무 힘이 들어감

-갑자기 딴 생각 들어서/당황해서 내용 끊는 것;;

-lack of entertaining point

-제스쳐가 산만하고 초조해보임

-표정굳음

-더듬더듬;; 특히 후반부..

엘라 목소리 발음 이 너무 좋아요,,,ㅎㅎ옛날에 득음조교할때보다 더 활발하고 자신감 넘치네요!!^^우와우!!~

-근데 쪼금 빠르네요~!ㅎ

Wow. Ella ... I could not give you any comments because you knew your fault that you had mentioned above yourself. That is what I want to tell. Some mistakes are nothing I think. Evaulate your English ability yourself everyday ^^* Good job. [K]