Today, I saw Jadoo.
Jadoo and her friend 𝗳𝗿𝗶𝗲𝗻𝗱𝘀 rode the train.
Jadoo went to bought 𝗯𝘂𝘆 snacks.
She met broter 𝗮 𝗯𝗿𝗼𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿 and sister.
They looked scary.
Jadoo and her friend 𝗳𝗿𝗶𝗲𝗻𝗱𝘀 met the ghost!
After they took off the train 𝗴𝗼𝘁 𝗼𝗳𝗳 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝘁𝗿𝗮𝗶𝗻, Jadoo saw newspapers 𝗮 𝗻𝗲𝘄𝘀𝗽𝗮𝗽𝗲𝗿.
In the newspaper, 6 months ago, the train was fired 𝗰𝗮𝘂𝗴𝗵𝘁 𝗳𝗶𝗿𝗲...
I think this story is 𝘄𝗮𝘀 scary.
Score: A-
Tips)
• “went to” 뒤에는 buy처럼 동사 원형을 써요.
• “got off the train”은 “기차에서 내렸다”는 뜻이에요.
• “caught fire”는 “불이 났다”라는 표현이에요.
• 왜 신문을 보고 무서웠는지 한 문장 더 쓰면 이야기가 더 재미있어요!
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