Re: Caillou-Sofia

[Teacher Winget]

The book’s title is "Caillou’s Summer Good Night."
One sunny day, Caillou meeting mosquito and meets grandma met a mosquito and then met his grandma. She is their favorite babysitter.

she playing with Rossy and Caillou She played with Rosie and Caillou.
they time to bed time When it was bedtime, she is read a book she read a book.
he sleep here and sleep here He fell asleep, so they really like liked their babysitter.

he can’t sleep bright so he feeling badly He couldn’t sleep because it was too bright, and he felt uncomfortable.
she said you need a cutton she get cutton so he sleep beautiful She said, "You need a curtain," so she got a curtain, and he slept peacefully.

Score: B+

Tips)

1. 문법: "meeting mosquito and meets grandma" 대신 "met a mosquito and then met his grandma," "he sleep here and sleep here" 대신 "he fell asleep"라고 해야 자연스럽습니다.
2. 내용 추가: "Caillou가 왜 잠을 잘 수 없었는지와 할머니가 문제를 해결하기 위해 무엇을 했는지 더 설명해 보세요!"