<p>This story was about Jadoo's <s>travle</s> 𝗍𝗋𝖺𝗏𝖾𝗅.</p><p>Jadoo's friends <s>were wanted</s> 𝘄𝗮𝗻𝘁𝗲𝗱 to <s>here</s> 𝗰𝗼𝗺𝗲 <b>there</b> again.</p><p>Jadoo <s>was ate</s> 𝗮𝘁𝗲 snacks <s>tomuch</s> 𝘁𝗼𝗼 𝗺𝘂𝗰𝗵.</p><p>So she had a stomachache.</p><p>Jadoo <s>was went</s> 𝘄𝗲𝗻𝘁 to <b>the</b> toilet.</p><p>But it was <b>a</b> blackout.</p><p>I think this story was fun.</p><p>Score: B+</p><p>Tips)<br>• 과거 이야기이므로 <b>ate, went</b>처럼 과거형을 써요.<br>• “too much”는 두 단어로 써요.<br>• “travel” 철자를 다시 연습해 보세요.<br>• 왜 정전이 되었는지 쓰면 이야기가 더 재미있어요!</p>
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