Re: Hello Jadoo summary Ruby

[Teacher Winget]

This story is 𝗐𝖺𝗌 about Jadoo and her friends.

First, in 𝗈𝗇 the train, Jadoo and her friends tried to come back.

Then, they played a game.

Jadoo lost the game, so she need 𝗻𝗲𝗲𝗱𝗲𝗱 to buy snacks.

Next that 𝗔𝗳𝘁𝗲𝗿 𝘁𝗵𝗮𝘁, Jadoo went to a rest room 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗿𝗲𝘀𝘁𝗿𝗼𝗼𝗺, and lights out 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗹𝗶𝗴𝗵𝘁𝘀 𝘄𝗲𝗻𝘁 𝗼𝘂𝘁.

Next that 𝗔𝗳𝘁𝗲𝗿 𝘁𝗵𝗮𝘁, they met ghosts.

Actually, the ghosts were died people 𝗱𝗲𝗮𝗱 𝗽𝗲𝗼𝗽𝗹𝗲.

I think this story was 𝘄𝗮𝘀 scary.

Score: A-

Tips)
• 과거 이야기이므로 was, needed처럼 과거형을 써요.
• “After that”은 이야기 순서를 이어 줄 때 자주 써요.
• “dead people”은 “죽은 사람들”이라는 뜻이에요. “died people”은 쓰지 않아요.
• 마지막에 왜 이 이야기가 무서웠는지 한 문장 더 쓰면 더 좋은 감상문이 돼요!

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