The title of this book is "Mount Everest."
The Himalayas were created by the movement of the earth. The huge terrain features 32 of the world's highest peaks, including Mount Everest. Mount Everest is the highest elevation. Climbers can see Tibet, India, and Nepal from the summit. But this giant mountain is not known to everyone as Everest. On May 29, 1953, Edmund Hillary and Tenzing Norgay became the first climbers to conquer the mountain. Since then, thousands of people have attempted to reach the summit of Mount Everest, but not all have been successful. Approximately 8,000 meters above the mountain, climbers enter what is known as the Death Zone. In 2010, climbers helped a thirteen-year-old boy climb to the top; the teenager became one of the world's youngest climbers. I think Mount Everest is very dangerous.
Grade: A-
Tips:
- Always use proper punctuation to separate ideas, like commas and periods.
- Check for consistency in names and titles, like "Mount Everest" instead of "Everest Mount."