<p style="text-align: left;">one day ruby and max play hide and sick.<br>ruby teach max how to play hide and sick.<br>ruby say first whrn you find onother you close your eye and count number.first hider is max .<br>when ruby counting number.<br>max hide behind plant. ruby find anywhere<br>then ruby find her.<br>next was max's find time. but max want to hide.<br>so max hide inside wordrobe. ruby don't know where max is. then max move robot.<br><br>ruby fallow robot and she find max.<br>when ruby turn off the robot max hide again.<br>ruby go bathroom,rubys clothes are there.<br>and ruby find max.<br>this time is realy rubys hide time.<br>and max find her then story was end <br>i think this story is fun and i want to play hide amd sick</p>
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첫댓글One day, Ruby and Max play hide and seek. Ruby teaches Max how to play hide and seek. Ruby says, "First, when you find (onother) another, you close your eyes and count (number.) numbers." The first hider is Max.
When Ruby (counting number.) counts numbers, Max hides (behind plant.) behind a plant. Ruby can't find Max anywhere, but then Ruby finds him.
Next, it's Max's turn to find. But Max wants to hide, so Max hides (inside wordrobe.) inside the wardrobe. Ruby doesn't know where Max is. Then Max (move robot.) moves the robot.
Ruby follows the robot and she finds Max. When Ruby (turn off the robot) turns off the robot, Max hides again. Ruby (go bathroom,) goes to the bathroom, Ruby's clothes are there, and Ruby finds Max.
This time is really Ruby's turn to hide, and Max finds her. Then the story ends. I think this story is fun and I want to play hide and (sick.) seek.
첫댓글 One day, Ruby and Max play hide and seek. Ruby teaches Max how to play hide and seek. Ruby says, "First, when you find (onother) another, you close your eyes and count (number.) numbers." The first hider is Max.
When Ruby (counting number.) counts numbers, Max hides (behind plant.) behind a plant. Ruby can't find Max anywhere, but then Ruby finds him.
Next, it's Max's turn to find. But Max wants to hide, so Max hides (inside wordrobe.) inside the wardrobe. Ruby doesn't know where Max is. Then Max (move robot.) moves the robot.
Ruby follows the robot and she finds Max. When Ruby (turn off the robot) turns off the robot, Max hides again. Ruby (go bathroom,) goes to the bathroom, Ruby's clothes are there, and Ruby finds Max.
This time is really Ruby's turn to hide, and Max finds her. Then the story ends. I think this story is fun and I want to play hide and (sick.) seek.
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Good Job!