Re: Caillou-kyle

[Teacher Winget]

Caillou Goes to a Theme Park

Caillou goes went to a theme park with his family.

Caillou feel felt happy.

Caillou and his father rider river ride rode the river ride.

Caillou ate cotton candy ate cotton candy with his family.

Caillou looked rided ferris wheel rode the Ferris wheel with his family.

Caillou see saw a teddy bear doll.

Caillou got a teddy bear from win the game won a teddy bear by playing a game.

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Score: B+

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Tips):

1. • "goes" → "went"
   • "feel" → "felt"
   • "rider river ride" → "rode the river ride"
   • "looked rided ferris wheel" → "rode the Ferris wheel"
   • "got a teddy bear from win the game" → "won a teddy bear by playing a game"
2. • Caillou가 놀이기구를 탈 때의 기분이나 재미있었던 장면을 묘사해 보세요.
   • 테디베어를 얻었을 때 가족과 함께 기뻐했던 순간을 추가하면 이야기가 더 흥미로워질 것입니다.
3. • "After that," "Finally," 같은 연결어를 사용하여 문장을 부드럽게 이어 보세요.