<p>Today I will tell you about Jadoo.</p><p>Jadoo <s>want's</s> 𝗐𝖺𝗇𝗍𝗌 to catch <s>the</s> bugs.</p><p>She and her father <s>go</s> 𝗐𝖾𝗇𝗍 to the mountain to catch <s>the</s> bugs.</p><p>But they <b>were</b> stung by <s>bee</s> 𝖻𝖾𝖾𝗌.</p><p>At <s>the</s> school**,** <b>her</b> friends <s>cauth</s> 𝖼𝖺𝗎𝗀𝗁𝗍 <s>loths</s> 𝗹𝗼𝘁𝘀 of bugs.</p><p>The bugs <s>fys</s> 𝖿𝗅𝖾𝗐 away, but her cat caught all the bugs.</p><p>I think this story <s>is</s> 𝗐𝖺𝗌 fun.</p><p>Score: <b>A-</b></p><p>Tips)<br>• 과거 이야기이므로 <b>went, caught, flew, was</b>처럼 과거형을 써요.<br>• “were stung by bees”는 “벌들에게 쏘였다”는 뜻이에요.<br>• “lots of”는 “많은”이라는 뜻이에요.<br>• 마지막에 고양이가 벌레를 잡은 뒤 어떻게 되었는지 쓰면 이야기가 더 재미있어요!</p>
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