<p>This story <b>was about</b> Jadoo <s>catch</s> 𝗰𝗮𝘁𝗰𝗵𝗶𝗻𝗴 the bug.</p><p>Jadoo <s>don't</s> 𝗱𝗶𝗱𝗻'𝘁 catch the bug and met <s>Dole dole's</s> 𝗗𝗼𝗹𝗱𝗼𝗹'𝘀 dad.</p><p>Jadoo <s>want</s> 𝘄𝗮𝗻𝘁𝗲𝗱 to <s>bought</s> 𝗯𝘂𝘆 the insect.</p><p>Jadoo's mom <s>catch</s> 𝗰𝗮𝘂𝗴𝗵𝘁 the bug.</p><p><s>The school the bug.</s> 𝗧𝗵𝗲 𝘀𝗰𝗵𝗼𝗼𝗹 𝗵𝗮𝗱 𝗺𝗮𝗻𝘆 𝗯𝘂𝗴𝘀.</p><p><s>The noulunge</s> 𝗧𝗵𝗲 𝗰𝗮𝘁 <s>catch</s> 𝗰𝗮𝘂𝗴𝗵𝘁 the bug.</p><p>I think <s>about</s> this story was fun.</p><p>Score: <b>B</b></p><p>Tips)<br>• 과거 이야기이므로 <b>didn't, wanted, caught</b>처럼 과거형을 써요.<br>• “wanted to” 뒤에는 <b>buy</b>처럼 동사 원형을 써요.<br>• “This story was about…”으로 시작하면 더 자연스러워요.<br>• 마지막에 어떤 장면이 재미있었는지 한 문장 더 쓰면 더 좋은 글이 돼요!</p>
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