Re: Charlotte 자두

[Teacher Winget]

This story was about Jadoo's Insect collectiong 𝗶𝗻𝘀𝗲𝗰𝘁 𝗰𝗼𝗹𝗹𝗲𝗰𝘁𝗶𝗻𝗴.

Jadoo was came 𝗰𝗮𝗺𝗲 home.

And she gave a sausage to her cat.

Jadoo was went 𝗴𝗼𝘁 to the forest for collecting the insect 𝘁𝗼 𝗰𝗼𝗹𝗹𝗲𝗰𝘁 𝗶𝗻𝘀𝗲𝗰𝘁𝘀.

But she was hit 𝗵𝗶𝘁 the bee's home 𝗮 𝗯𝗲𝗲𝗵𝗶𝘃𝗲.

So Jadoo and Jadoo's cat was got bitten 𝗴𝗼𝘁 𝗯𝗶𝘁𝘁𝗲𝗻.

I think this story was fun.

Score: A-

Tips)
• “came”와 “went” 앞에는 was를 쓰지 않아요.
• “to collect insects”가 자연스러운 표현이에요.
• Jadoo와 고양이는 두 명이지만 got bitten만 써도 자연스러워요.
• “beehive”는 벌집이라는 뜻이에요.

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