Re: Read it (Olivia)

[Teacher Winget]

The title of this story is "The Surprising Origins Of English Words." Today, I will talk about the origins of English words. First, a number of some English words come from old customs. This part was easy to read because I already knew it. Second, English some English words come from myths. I was interested to learn for the first time the origin of the English word clue. Also, it wasn't boring because it was a mythological story. Lastly, it is a case we use were invited by authors there are cases where words were invented by authors. This part was a little difficult because there was a lot of information I didn't know. It is It was also interesting to learn about the origin of freelancer the word freelancer. I think this story was a little difficult, but it was interesting to learn about the origins of English words.

Grade: A-

Comment: Great work, Olivia!

Tips):

1. Use "some" instead of "a number of" for smoother flow.
2. Clarify sentences for better readability.
3. Use the correct form of "invented" instead of "were invited."