<p>Jadoo <s>has</s> 𝗵𝗮𝗱 <s>a insects</s> 𝗮𝗻 𝗶𝗻𝘀𝗲𝗰𝘁 homework.</p><p>Her friends <s>are finish</s> 𝗳𝗶𝗻𝗶𝘀𝗵𝗲𝗱 the homework.</p><p>Her dad helped <s>the</s> Jadoo.</p><p>She saw <s>a bees hive</s> 𝗮 𝗯𝗲𝗲𝗵𝗶𝘃𝗲.</p><p>She was stung by <s>a bees</s> 𝗯𝗲𝗲𝘀.</p><p>Her mom**,** <s>long time ago she good at cought</s> 𝗮 𝗹𝗼𝗻𝗴 𝘁𝗶𝗺𝗲 𝗮𝗴𝗼, 𝘄𝗮𝘀 𝗴𝗼𝗼𝗱 𝗮𝘁 𝗰𝗮𝘁𝗰𝗵𝗶𝗻𝗴 insects.</p><p>Her friends <s>are</s> 𝘄𝗲𝗿𝗲 very good at <s>cought</s> 𝗰𝗮𝘁𝗰𝗵𝗶𝗻𝗴 insects.</p><p>She dropped the insects.</p><p>Teacher came <b>to</b> class**, but** <s>every childrens are all gone</s> 𝗮𝗹𝗹 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗰𝗵𝗶𝗹𝗱𝗿𝗲𝗻 𝘄𝗲𝗿𝗲 𝗴𝗼𝗻𝗲.</p><p>Score: <b>B+</b></p><p>Tips)<br>• 과거 이야기이므로 <b>had, finished, were</b>처럼 과거형을 써요.<br>• “good at catching”처럼 <b>good at</b> 뒤에는 <b>-ing</b>를 써요.<br>• “children”은 이미 복수라서 <b>childrens</b>는 쓰지 않아요.<br>• “beehive”는 벌집이라는 뜻이에요.</p>
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