Re: Caillou-Mark

[Teacher Winget]

The title of this story is "Caillou is Scared of Dogs."

One day, Caillou Built built sandcastles in the sandbox.
Then, a dog appeared. Caillou was very scared because he thank thought the dog's sound was very scary.
He went to his mom and he hided hid under the bench.

The next day, Caillou went to his grandmother's house while his mom went to shopping was shopping.
But he didn't know his grandmother was taking care of her neighbor's puppy.

He entered his grandmother's house, and the puppy was cring crying.
He was scary scared, so he hided hid in the closet.

His grandmother persuaded him into he meet puppy to meet the puppy.
She read him a book about the dog dogs.
Afterward, he didn't scary about dog was no longer scared of dogs and he played enjoy enjoyed playing with the puppy.

Now, he don't scary about dog now isn’t scared of dogs anymore!

Score: B+

Tips)

1. 문법: "thank" 대신 "thought," "hided" 대신 "hid," "don't scary about dog now" 대신 "isn’t scared of dogs anymore"라고 해야 자연스럽습니다.
2. 내용 추가: Caillou가 강아지에 대해 배운 점이나, 할머니가 그의 두려움을 극복하도록 도운 방식에 대해 더 자세히 설명하면 좋습니다!