Jihoo

[Teacher2]

The title of this animation is "An Entire Night at SpongeBob's House." At 6 pm: Spongebob arrived at 6 pm was impressed by the mess

surprise party. At 7:15 pm Two animal fought because of TV At 8:45 pm Spongebob take care of Whining. At 9:30pm A spongebob pet has leg and arm At 10pm spongebob read a scary book and he want sleep At 10:20pm Spongebob feel not good

At 11:10pm Spongebob couldn't sleep anymore 

At 11:55pm His house is broken.

At 1:00 He tried sleep continue but impossible

At 3:45 Two

[Teacher1]

The title of this animation is "An Entire Night at SpongeBob's House."

At 6 pm, SpongeBob arrived and was impressed by the surprise party mess.

At 7:15 pm, two animals fought because of the TV.

At 8:45 pm, SpongeBob took care of Whining. (Corrected tense)

At 9:30 pm, SpongeBob's pet got legs and arms. (Corrected tense)

At 10 pm, SpongeBob read a scary book and wanted to sleep. (Corrected tense)

At 10:20 pm, SpongeBob felt not good. (Corrected tense)

[Teacher1]

At 11:10 pm, SpongeBob couldn't sleep anymore. (Added period)

At 11:55 pm, his house was broken. (Corrected grammar)

At 1 am, he tried to sleep continuously but it was impossible. (Corrected time format and grammar)

At 3:45 am, two animals (Sentence incomplete, but corrected time format)

This book is very fun.