Re: 안하은 summary

[Teacher Winget]

The title name of this story is "Ruby Delivers."

The name of the character in the video characters in the video are Max and Ruby!

Ruby first make a Cupcake first made cupcakes.

And then MAX fly Max flew a toy airplane.

I think Max likes loved toy airplanes.

And Ruby likes looking at things and drawing enjoyed drawing and paying attention to details.

Max is have sooo very good idea had a very good idea.

Max have had many toy airplanes.

Then I think a neighborhood is very friendly I think their neighborhood was very friendly.

Max came up with a good idea and sold a lot of cupcakes that Ruby made to thier neighbors to their neighbors.

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Score: B+

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Tips):

1. 문법과 표현:

   • "first make a Cupcake" → "first made cupcakes"
   • "MAX fly" → "Max flew"
   • "is have sooo very good idea" → "had a very good idea"로 수정하세요.

2. 내용 추가하기:

   • Max가 비행기를 사용해 플라이어를 배달하는 구체적인 장면을 추가해 보세요.
   • 이웃들이 컵케이크를 받고 어떤 반응을 보였는지 상상해서 적어 보세요.

3. 문장 연결:

   • 문장을 부드럽게 연결하려면 "Then," "Finally," 같은 연결어를 활용해 보세요.