[Corrected] Traffic jams on the Highways on Sunday.

[Jim Lee]

Your writing	My corrections
Hi Jim! I went to Daegu-city to attend one of my seniors' wedding this Sunday. Then, I left Daegu-city around 4 p.m and took the Gyungbu-Highway from the West Daegu Interchange. The traffic condition was ok until the beginning of Daejon-city. But it was not good condition from Daejon-city as I expected. I couldn't drive over than 20kms per an hour and it makes me so annoying, because my car is not an automatic system car, so I had to control the gire-system a lot of times. It was not a Highway anymore at that time. I could say it was a huge parking lot. I thought most of the people who were driving on the Highway like me went to mountains for enjoying the colorful autumnal leaves then, backing to their homes. Fanally, I decided to stay in Chungju-city for a night and backing to Seoul this morning early. Now, I am at my office and a bit tired cause I couldn't sleep enough last night. Thank you!!	Hi Jim! I went to Daegu-city to attend one of my seniors' wedding this Sunday. Then, I left Daegu-city to come back to Seoul around 4 p.m and took the Gyungbu-Highway from the West Daegu Interchange. The traffic condition was ok until we got to the beginning of Daejon-city. But it was not good The road condition from Daejon-city was as I expected. I couldn't drive over than 20kms per an hour and it madkes me so annoyeding, because my car is not an automatic transmissionsystem car., so I had to change control the gears ire-system a lot of times. It was not a Highway anymore at that time. I could say it was a huge parking lot. I thought most of the people who were driving on the Highway, like me, went to the mountains tofor enjoying the colorful autumnal leaves and were then, backing coming back to their homes. Fianally, I decided to stay in Chungju-city for a night and come backing to Seoul early this morning early. Now, I am at my office and I am a bit tired because I couldn't sleep enough last night. Thank you!!
Comment: Very good.  Your thought process is very smooth.  However, you did make some mistakes.  Take a good look at my corrections and see if you can do it better next time. Personal comment:  The traffic condition in Korea is sometimes too much to bear.  I once got stuck in the highway for 4 hours and I vowed to myself that I would never drive out of the city again.  I wish there were some ways to solve this terrible problem this country has. :-)